Wednesday, 7 November 2012

Burning Fire (written at 7 years old)


One morning in New-Leaf season, Bouncepaw woke to go hunting with his mentor Cherryfur.  Bouncepaw mewed to him “Where will we hunt?” “Near the ShadowClan border,” Cherryfur replied “there’s lots of prey around there.” They silently padded over to the border and caught the scent of a mouse, immediately Bouncepaw posed himself into the hunters crouch and sprang. He killed the mouse with one sharp bite and took it back to Cherryfur. Back at the camp, the Clan were either eating some fresh-kill off the pile or sunning themselves on some rocks. Suddenly, the Clan Leader emerged from her rocky cave and let out a commanding yowl “Cats of ThunderClan. Meet at Highledge for a Clan meeting.” Below her, all of the cats slowly began to congregate under Highledge.

Bouncepaw spotted the Clan’s Leader, Shimmerstar, and ran over to her and asked “when can I be a warrior?” She purred and told him “tomorrow you can.” Tomorrow! He was finally going to be a warrior!

After a restless night of sleep Bouncepaw remembered something; he was going to be a warrior today. He scrambled quickly up in his mossy bedding, messing it up. Other cats were already awake and eating. He raced over to the pile of food and plucked out a plump sparrow. Sitting by the apprentice’s den were two cats waving their tails to him. They were telling him to eat with them. So he padded happily to them and told them that he would be a warrior today. They congratulated him by excitedly squealing because their best friend was going to be a warrior. Shimmerstar leaped on to Highledge and let out a caterwauling yowl “cats of ThunderClan, meet under Highledge.”  Their leader, Shimmerstar, spoke again “we will be making Bouncepaw a warrior today. He will now be called Bouncepelt.” The cats cheered “Bouncepelt, Bouncepelt”. Bouncepelt felt proud. Maybe he could have an apprentice. His friends leaped over to him and said “congratulations”. To the side of the Leader, a black kit was standing there with its shiny fur sleek. “This is our new apprentice Batpaw” announced the Leader, “his mentor is Bouncepelt.” Bouncepelt let the apprentice sit down with him.

Batpaw slept peacefully only to by woken by Bouncepelt. He was shouting “Wake up we’re going training.” Batpaw followed Bouncepelt out of the camp to the training hollow, “first we’ll do some hunting, then tomorrow I’ll teach you some fighting moves.”  Soon Bouncepelt found the scent of a vole and crouched down waving his tail for Batpaw to copy. “Batpaw, leap into the air and catch it,” Bouncepelt quietly instructed him.  Batpaw did as he was told leaping into the air and catching the vole with his paws. He gave it a bite and carried it away to Bouncepelt. He purred in amusement at the prey, then purred “let’s get back to camp before the prey is devoured by the other cats.” His voice was hurried and fast. He clearly wanted to get back…for he had seen a long fierce cobra with eyes as green as sparkling emeralds. When it materialized out of a green bush it released its big jaws, revealing red sharp fangs.

 “RUN!!” Bouncepelt yelled through the loud hissing from the cobra. They fled as fast as the wind, the cobra right behind them, scarily clamping his jaws on thin air right behind their tails. Out of breath they rushed into the camp leaving the cobra behind. The cats dashed straight into Shimmerstar and reported to her about the cobra “We met a blood-thirsty cobra and it chased us all the way here but luckily we lost it.” Unfortunately a noisy hiss made everyone freeze. It was the cobra again.  As the cats rapidly fled, the cobra slithered into the camp and headed towards the warriors den. Shimmerstar let out an angry hiss at the scaly cobra from her den.

With a flash, Bouncepelt leapt and ripped at the cobra’s smooth scales with her claws. Another cat darted to help, signalling with his tail for all the other warriors and apprentices to fight. But the cobra lashed out with its big head, the huge red jaws exposed. It was going towards Batpaw. Bouncepelt’s ginger pelt glistened in the warm sunlight that was shining down on the noisy battle. Suddenly the cobra changed directions, lunging at any cat in it’s way making them squeal with terror.

The cats snarled at the slippery cobra. Shimmerstar ordered Bouncepelt and Batpaw to chase the cobra away with a flick of her caramel coloured tail.  They immediately obeyed her and followed the fast cobra out of the grassy camp. They were almost at the steep rocky mountains when the big snake disappeared with one frustrated hiss. The cats halted, panting from chasing the cobra, almost crashing into a bramble bush. They turned and ran back home with their fur rippling in the gentle breeze.

A Gathering was called for to talk about the attack of the cobra. Once they were all settled near the crumbling cliff, Shimmerstar began speaking to her Clan “We will need to rebuild the camp from the damage that the snake caused. Look for items to build up the walls and den, fetch some moss, sticks and brambles to rebuild this camp. I will also need some for my cave.”.” The cats scattered amongst themselves and finally reappeared a few minutes later carrying sticks, moss and ferns.

Slowly, they built the camp with the materials they’d found. When they were finished they went to their nests and settled down to go to sleep for it had been an emotionally exhausting day.

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